Review Detail of Tiny_Tim_5672 in In Danmachi world with Obito's power
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It’s a really mediocre fic the action stinks and the character interaction is ruined by the Author decision to make the main character Tobi like in all of the interactions with his over the top actions and general stupidity it fells like im reading a story about tobi being in the story rather than a whole new character with obitos abilities even though he was nerfed by the author he was supposed to Get everything obito had to offer at the time of his joining the akatsuki but he has a normal person strength and speed and he doesn’t have wood justu but I don’t know if he did have wood style by then so maybe I’m wrong but still it’s basically just chapter after chapter of the worst parts of a lot of anime,over the top moments like running away crying or calling people dogs or say stop barking it’ just Annoying to read after I was excited about the original concept also the writing and grammer as a whole is just bad but the author put that as a warning in the synopsis so I can’t fault them too much on that
In Danmachi world with Obito's power
KissShot6
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first of all, I'm happy that you said the MC is like Tobi in all of the interactions. That means I succeeded in bringing out his characteristics and that makes me happy. for the strength and speed etc, I have a plan about that and the reason for that. but of course, he Will get stronger in the future, since this is still on early chapter. And for wood Jutsu, since I never saw him use wood jutsu when he in akatsuki, so im not give MC that. Maybe MC have the potential to use that but since Obito never use that in the anime, im not give the MC that jutsu, maybe he simply doesn't know how to use it? Who know. For running, crying, and etc, I intend to make my fanfic more lively since I don't know if I can bringing out the other character's characteristics. But maybe that was bad decision, then again I can't change that, I already write it, so yeah. For the 'dog', 'barking', etc, tbh I don't know any other insulting(?) word for that situation, so I just use what I know, lol😅 Anyway, thanks for the review and criticism(?)
KissShot6:first of all, I'm happy that you said the MC is like Tobi in all of the interactions. That means I succeeded in bringing out his characteristics and that makes me happy. for the strength and speed etc, I have a plan about that and the reason for that. but of course, he Will get stronger in the future, since this is still on early chapter. And for wood Jutsu, since I never saw him use wood jutsu when he in akatsuki, so im not give MC that. Maybe MC have the potential to use that but since Obito never use that in the anime, im not give the MC that jutsu, maybe he simply doesn't know how to use it? Who know. For running, crying, and etc, I intend to make my fanfic more lively since I don't know if I can bringing out the other character's characteristics. But maybe that was bad decision, then again I can't change that, I already write it, so yeah. For the 'dog', 'barking', etc, tbh I don't know any other insulting(?) word for that situation, so I just use what I know, lol😅 Anyway, thanks for the review and criticism(?)
Leylindd:he didn't use it when he's Akatsuki but he used the wood style when rin died thoimage
Yeah but the title says reincarnated with obitos power no that the mc is obito so you having him act exactly like obito is a waste and stupid tbh
KissShot6:first of all, I'm happy that you said the MC is like Tobi in all of the interactions. That means I succeeded in bringing out his characteristics and that makes me happy. for the strength and speed etc, I have a plan about that and the reason for that. but of course, he Will get stronger in the future, since this is still on early chapter. And for wood Jutsu, since I never saw him use wood jutsu when he in akatsuki, so im not give MC that. Maybe MC have the potential to use that but since Obito never use that in the anime, im not give the MC that jutsu, maybe he simply doesn't know how to use it? Who know. For running, crying, and etc, I intend to make my fanfic more lively since I don't know if I can bringing out the other character's characteristics. But maybe that was bad decision, then again I can't change that, I already write it, so yeah. For the 'dog', 'barking', etc, tbh I don't know any other insulting(?) word for that situation, so I just use what I know, lol😅 Anyway, thanks for the review and criticism(?)
