A good concept but awful delivery. I can't even follow the story, its just that bad. Maybe if the Author edits it then it may be atleast understandable.
Theoryz
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LIKEI didn't mean the storyline or the story itself, but just the grammar and spelling. And maybe the way you write too, its just confusing itself.
Theoryz:No I won't ...I mean I can edit my spelling and grammar but not storyline itself.Thanks for review tho .
Stieborn:I didn't mean the storyline or the story itself, but just the grammar and spelling. And maybe the way you write too, its just confusing itself.