Review Detail of Shepard53 in The new chapters of Dragon ball( FanFic)

Item: The new chapters of Dragon ball( FanFic)
Rating: 2.6

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Shepard53Lv41yrShepard53

Ima be honest the chapters are to short and its very jumbled.

The new chapters of Dragon ball( FanFic)

TheM337

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TheM337AuthorTheM337

Thanks for your review. To be honest I got bored with this series and kind of gave up on it. I want to rewrite it from the very beginning with a new plot and a better writing style. Thank you.

1yr

Shepard53Lv4Shepard53

np its cool I liked the concept and will prolly read if you do remake it.

TheM337:Thanks for your review. To be honest I got bored with this series and kind of gave up on it. I want to rewrite it from the very beginning with a new plot and a better writing style. Thank you.

1yr

TheM337AuthorTheM337

I just redid the first Three Chapters. I Apologize for the Delay, as I was coming up with a plot for the first Arch. All other chapters have been removed due to a new plot... Thank You.

Shepard53:np its cool I liked the concept and will prolly read if you do remake it.

1yr

Shepard53Lv4Shepard53

its cool. I'll read it still

TheM337:I just redid the first Three Chapters. I Apologize for the Delay, as I was coming up with a plot for the first Arch. All other chapters have been removed due to a new plot... Thank You.

1yr