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Review Detail of Alfiemooon in Game of Thrones: The Dragonborn.

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Terrible writing. It's written as if it'd 3rd person, but in first. It's like the writer couldn't decide between the two, so he done what every bad writer does and makes the 1st person narrator omniscient. 1st person is exclusively about that characters thoughts etc. we see everything through their eyes. We are NOT supposed to have the narrator talk to an audience that he shouldn't even know exists.

Game of Thrones: The Dragonborn.

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