Review Detail of Jack_Priper in Raised in Dungeon

(spoiler alert: this is not quite a review) ..... grammar aside, the story has been good so far. though. is this inspired by "How I became a Star" or something like that by kevinmbeautcha? or spirit immortal? i consider good stories to be bad stories of they spend more time stressing the readers and making them sad. what's the point of distracting myself from life if the story just makes me feel sad or disappointed?