Review Detail of Aaron_Cohen_6635 in Raised in Dungeon

Item: Raised in Dungeon
Rating: 3

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Aaron_Cohen_6635Lv31yrAaron_Cohen_6635

It is a somewhat nice novel and the concept has an amazing potential if devloped correctly but, the writing make it a bit unpleasant to read. I recommend the author to learn grammar and please use the appropriate time for each sentance.

Raised in Dungeon

Hile_Lawrence

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Hile_LawrenceAuthorHile_Lawrence

Thank you for your critics and suggestion. English is not my first language. I will try to improve it as soon as possible.

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ReawakeningLv11Reawakening

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Hile_Lawrence:Thank you for your critics and suggestion. English is not my first language. I will try to improve it as soon as possible.

1yr

Im_A_camel_writerLv3Im_A_camel_writer

It makes ur writing choppy

Reawakening:download grammarly

1yr