Very impressive, the story has potential and it was fun to read. I am smirking while I am reading lol. Kudos! Also, it has a good pacing. With more chaps, this will be lit in the future! The only downside is it is confusing who was speaking sometimes. But it was only a trifling one. Well, good luck!
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