Dear Author, I tried out your first 4 chapter you have uploaded so far. As I read I found put that I say, she says, she does, he does, has put after a dialogue. putting it everywhere makes me feel like I am in a loop. change it for sometimes. As for the story line, I sorry. I still didn't get it. Anyways, Iam here to support this author... Keep going. Make your mistakes a new step to do better. Because I am also in the same situation as u.. Keep gping author...đ
Renee_Writes
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