I have some problems with the story and way it progresses that honestly ruin it for me. -Luffy recruiting anything that isn't an NPC into his crew -Crew feels more like a squad of bodybuilders than pirates -Honestly don't like Luffy, feels to awkward to be the leader. His relationship is almost like master taliking to his minions -characters feel like they've been died down. This is a spoiler but making Sanji not smoke almost feels criminal. It's like telling us to ignore his background and trauma while not telling us why he should do this. -then I feel like some of the charcters are not handled well. Other than that it's a fine novel. It's living up to one piece which isn't easy and I respect the effort but just isn't for me.
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