Review Detail of DaoistjcJwtW in One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
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Tiene harem ???????? Deberías aumentar los capítulos más largos muy cortos ojalá no la dejas abandonada etc la mayoría de la historia de one piece la dejan abandonada etc entonces si aumentan más la escritura a los capítulos
One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
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Un consejo también coloca un poco de romance si me ago entender que piensa los enemigos de el etc si me ago entender y también me gustaría no se Nami sepa defenderse por ejemplo la fruta logia de Enel sería bueno para nami para que se fortalezca y tenga su romance con su pareja se valla conciencia poco a poco si me ago entender
Fallen_Crown:Thanks, Luffy might have multiple girls, but no More then four or three. The chapters are hard to write and upload everday, that'll why sometimes they are short. Sorry.
Heh.i just wanted write in comment section if this is Harem.but now i have my answer.but now i wana ask if thare gona be Lemons.? and who will be in his Harem..? Nami.Robin.Hancock..?
Fallen_Crown:Thanks, Luffy might have multiple girls, but no More then four or three. The chapters are hard to write and upload everday, that'll why sometimes they are short. Sorry.
Nami.Hancock.Carrot.Robin..they are the close to Luffy the most.with Carrot you just need to tweak and twist they interaction litte bit.
Fallen_Crown:Thanks, Luffy might have multiple girls, but no More then four or three. The chapters are hard to write and upload everday, that'll why sometimes they are short. Sorry.