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The grammar is on point, and there are rarely mistakes, and even then, nothing major. The only thing I can't stand is the slow pace. I am at chapter 26 and the MC hasn't even started his journey but is still training on Dawn island. Boring af
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Hey man, If that's the case just skip to when Liffy starts the journey. I even seperated the volumes where he starts the journey. The story is slow paced cause I want to 'show' Luffy's character and others... I also set up a few things that will be really important later on. Anyway thanks man. I really appreciate you took the time and shared your thoughts. Though I would still recommend giving it another try.