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Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv31yrHasan_Shopnil

I love this fan-fic....Please solve this Monkey D. Mario naming problem of the Marines.Also Please let Luffy learn Hassoken,King Punch,Red Hawk,Conqueror Coating,Emission and Internal Destruction,Diable Jambe (Red Hawk Kick Version),Also recruit Yamato and Carrot (maybe Ulti) in the crew along with the original crew....please don't recruit Buggy,Gin (debatable),Collect a lot of different dials from Skypia like Impact,Tone,,Reject,Axe,Flame,Ball,Breath,Eisen,Milky,Flash,Heat,Flavor,Jet,Lamp,Vision,Thunder,Control,Mad,Water etc. Dials and make upgraded Thousand Sunny.Also let a lot of characters like Bell-mere,Titi,Olivia,Hiriluk,Tom,Otohime,Rosinante,Lami (Law's sister),Sora,Toki etc. be alive in future.Also let luffy collect Pure Gold and also let a lot of movie part be in It....I really love the fic...keep up the good work and release more chapters much faster.

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One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Fallen_Crown

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Fallen_Crown
Fallen_CrownAuthorFallen_Crown

Thanks man, I really appreciate it. I will try using your suggestions.

DaoistCharubdis
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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Hello.

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

Hello,Long time no see pal,How are you?Did you want to talk to me about something?

Dark_PersonJJ:Hello.
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Im fine. thank you. I noticed you stoped reading Some_Writer.? Why.? if i can ask.? He is now writing DXD story. It is called Issei Redemption.

Hasan_Shopnil:Hello,Long time no see pal,How are you?Did you want to talk to me about something?
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

And what can you tell me abaut this One Piece story you are reading now. I stoped reading it for some reason months ago. And now i want to read it again. But before it i want to see if it is any good.

Dark_PersonJJ:Im fine. thank you. I noticed you stoped reading Some_Writer.? Why.? if i can ask.? He is now writing DXD story. It is called Issei Redemption.
Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

Nah,It’s not my cup of tea,I even lost interest in that bleach fic during the last few chapters and DxD fic is almost similar,same concept,same immaturity,same overpoweredness,same ruthlessness,I just don't find It enjoyable anymore. Suppose you used to watch cartoons like Doraemon,Power Rangers etc. when you were a child but If you watch It now It'll be fun sure,It'll also be nostalgic but you'll also see through their lameness and understand how unrealistic It is even If are a die hard fan of It,You'll just see through the essence of It,Some_Writer fics are also the same to me,It feels to predictible and unlikable to my taste now so I just stopped reading them,but appreciate his hard work but I just don't like It anymore,also I don't like system and that overpowered ruthlessness,Sorry but I ranted a bit,I just don't like It anymore that's the gist of It.

Dark_PersonJJ:Im fine. thank you. I noticed you stoped reading Some_Writer.? Why.? if i can ask.? He is now writing DXD story. It is called Issei Redemption.
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Oh ok then. And what can you tell me about this One Piece story. ? It is any good.?

Hasan_Shopnil:Nah,It’s not my cup of tea,I even lost interest in that bleach fic during the last few chapters and DxD fic is almost similar,same concept,same immaturity,same overpoweredness,same ruthlessness,I just don't find It enjoyable anymore. Suppose you used to watch cartoons like Doraemon,Power Rangers etc. when you were a child but If you watch It now It'll be fun sure,It'll also be nostalgic but you'll also see through their lameness and understand how unrealistic It is even If are a die hard fan of It,You'll just see through the essence of It,Some_Writer fics are also the same to me,It feels to predictible and unlikable to my taste now so I just stopped reading them,but appreciate his hard work but I just don't like It anymore,also I don't like system and that overpowered ruthlessness,Sorry but I ranted a bit,I just don't like It anymore that's the gist of It.
Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

Nope,I quit this unreal adventure too,there's too much importance in OC and MC's too overpowered and ruthless,Author-nim doesn't add fillers and movies either,from the original One Piece that I love It differs too much. But you could try and then tell me how you like It or not.

Dark_PersonJJ:Oh ok then. And what can you tell me about this One Piece story. ? It is any good.?
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Oh thats bad. Well i ask someone else if is worth the try.

Hasan_Shopnil:Nope,I quit this unreal adventure too,there's too much importance in OC and MC's too overpowered and ruthless,Author-nim doesn't add fillers and movies either,from the original One Piece that I love It differs too much. But you could try and then tell me how you like It or not.
jean_paul_superior
jean_paul_superiorLv1jean_paul_superior

Uta

Fallen_Crown:Thanks man, I really appreciate it. I will try using your suggestions.