Review Detail of _Shades_ in Devil's love Impostor

Welcome to world of authors, Devin! I wish u a smooth writing as u continue. This is a brilliant masterpiece and can say you're really good at adding twists in ur story. You just succeeded in leaving me cliffhanged! Are u sure this is ur first time writing? Okay let's get down to business! Your weakness... *Your characters are a little confusing. I mean the way u put them in the novel. Let me quote: "Ah, Elisa!" Elisabeth shouted and placed... — From Chapter 3, Despicable. You left me confused there, wondering who was hurt and who wasn't. Please correct this! I'd also advice u to edit ur works hours after writing as it helps to spot out mistakes u made. *I never said after writing. HOURS after u are done with it. Like after taking three hours breaks from writing.* That will help in making ur book less confusing to other readers. Well, those are the things I sighted, I don't know what another person is gon' say from his pov. So far, so good... ur book so A-okay! welcome once again!❤️