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angel_ari
angel_ariLv111yrangel_ari

Oh wow besides a boring beginning when you get to about chapter 3 the book gets so interesting you don't want to turn away. It was like the story line was pulling me in. 10 out of 10. BTW make sure to give my book a honest review for the swap.

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Chaos Path

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Loose_PenAuthorLoose_Pen

Thanks for the review. But I want to know which parts did you find boring in the first 3 chapters? Please tell me. Thanks!

angel_ari
angel_ariLv11angel_ari

It was the world building I felt like it was a bit spread out. But that's only because I can only keep myself interested in world building for two chapters after that it's really hard to keep reading. But your book does get interesting as long as people read past that part.

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Loose_PenAuthorLoose_Pen

Ok I’ll thanks, I’ll see what I can do with the world building.

angel_ari:It was the world building I felt like it was a bit spread out. But that's only because I can only keep myself interested in world building for two chapters after that it's really hard to keep reading. But your book does get interesting as long as people read past that part.