Review Detail of DerangedPirate in In Marvel I can Evolve Infinitely (X-Men/Marvel)

This is a translated chinese novel. Two chapters in you can already see the chinese bleed through. The grammar and sentence structuring is not the best either (This coming from someone who's first language isn't english either). I'd imagine the futher you read the worse the translation gets since two chapters in it's already poor at best, can't be bothered to waste more of my time to find out.