well it's not bad, except it needs a lot of tlc in the editing department. mc is neither standoffish or overbearing. he just quietly does his own thing and kicks butt while doing so. if the editing was better I'd give this higher marks cuz I like mc's like this. anyway, I'll keep reading when it's fully released.
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