Review Detail of mad_jackal in Adventures Of A Goblin

This is a really not good character to write a story about. The mc is a massive idiot that is struggling to understand basic concepts and I understand that it could be interpreted as a type of shock I doesn't make for a fun read. The most annoying thing is that the author is trying to explain the basics of the genera to us through incredibly repetitive sentences that if were cut out would shrink the story by half and pace it better. I tried to read more but I couldn't get past 15 chapters. I assume this is a first at bat and if so this will help get the author some writing experience and help them make something better later.