Overall an interesting concept and promising story, however the author continously makes poor choices concerning character development and pacing which make the story disintresting. There is a distinct lack of creativity involving the storyline and the main characters usage of their ability to copying and merge powers, almost every conflict can be summed up to be caused by the own mc's stupidity, weakness, or poor planning (I count 7 instances many of which involve the same oversights), instead of learning from this or developing their own ability the Mc becomes conceited in their own ability to narrowly escape danger.
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