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SlayyyyAllll
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just found it and yep it's good MC for so far good not an idiot walking around And for the world background, it's not too much because it's still at the beginning of the story so keep it up

Harry Potter: Professor Astaroth

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Thanks appreciate it it’ my first novel so if you can give any tips but mostly speaking I added the holy stuff as an almost side stuff.

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DEvz29:Thanks appreciate it it’ my first novel so if you can give any tips but mostly speaking I added the holy stuff as an almost side stuff.
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OC Olivia Greengrass it will be non harem but she won't play a major roll until the MC's 4th or 5th year when he is actually of age although they do start dating in the first. I've made it so age does matter in the novel and the characters aren't smashing at 11 like ive seen in other novels

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