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I know it's too early to give a review, but I really wanted to do it as I noticed something that the author should've known. So first of all, change your book cover and make it more captivating to urge people to read your novel by only having a look at the cover, it will increase your valid readers too. Secondly, please shorten your paragraphs, or else a reader like me will just ignore them, considering them too long to read.😁 Yeah the plot was good, but you need improvement to make it even more enthralling🤷‍♀️

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DonDenis
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Thank you very much for this review. I'll improve where I can especially on paragraph length. I hope the story has been quality enough so far too. I'll also try to get a good cover. Thanks.