Review Detail of SlimNeez in DxD: King of Salt
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The book had many plot holes and the author just makes stuff up along the way and it makes no sense canonically. Making OC’s for the MC for no reason, characters are stupid to make MC look “smart”, giving powers to the MC out of nowhere, the fights are annoying to read since every enemy group is like a peanut gallery just describing his attacks when we just read the fight, the MC repeats a lot of stuff and contradicts what he said the chapter before, etc. I could go on but its not worth it tbh TL:DR If u want to give this fanfic a try, turn ur brain off and just accept everything no matter how stupid and unrealistic it is.
DxD: King of Salt
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making oc's and making stuff up has a reason reason, but this reason is a different problem, the story is set waaaay too much back in time to the point this can barely be called highschool dxd, also I don't think characters are stupid per se, I mean kronos? ate his children and keept them alive inside him so they can't kill him... genius right...? heaven? heaven is like that movie in a world where lies do not exist and mc "creates" lies of course they are dumbass if the first sin has not happened yet.
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