Review Detail of NessoftheSNES in {{{DROPPPED}}}

The novel is amazing! The writing makes it very easy to lose yourself in the world of the novel, and its characters. The descriptions for every little thing paint a vibrant image of the setting, and the dynamics between characters. The only two criticisms I think im qualified to offer are, first off, the pacing, and second, the character development of the protagonist. The pacing can be slow at times, because of all the descriptions for everything, which are good, on one hand, for reasons i mentioned before, but can drag for a bit long at times. Now the protagonist doesn't seem to have any development. it might be a bit early to say that, as the novel is only 9 chapters, but i felt the need to say it anyway. That's not to say he doesn't have a character, but he certainly isn't experiencing any visible change. These are only minor criticisms though, and don't take out any of the fun in reading the story. It has the perfect mixture of "lighthearted" and "really serious" tone it needs. Keep it up Tоварищ!! (sidenote: i really wanna see Tachibana meet a gruesome end)