Review Detail of Knowo in Adventures of an Android

Author here, any feedback is welcome. I'm not some professional writer, but I've been writing stuff for college for a while now. I've recently had a lot of spare time and as an avid reader of webnovels for many years now I told myself to give writing a shot. Any advice, wishes or plot ideas that you may have, send it my way, I'll try my best to incorporate it. Cheers