Review Detail of Mystic_Velvet in Ruthless Billionaire's Love

I'm not into this type of love stories, but I will you my honest thoughts. About the writing quality, there is still some room for improvement, in some paragraph you actually didn't put space between the words. Story development: It is going in a good way, but it is a Litle fast-paced. And in some scenes you can describe at what place they went and other things. Character design: I can understand what you are trying to tell Readers about their emotions and feeling but, you haven't described their appearance and other physical features. Updating stability: you should publish more chapter. World background: it seem to be modern world.