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The character development and the mindset of the character is simply too good. The writing is phenomenal and i love it. If you, the author manages to control usopp and mc as they both will use long range shooting type weapons, it would be amazing. The dialogues are Chad type. So far no grammar mistakes as well. Please don't change his personality as that is what makes me more curious. Also I don't know if you are planning to give him conqueror haki, which might be possible as his dream is adventuring, but i think it would be better if you could give him Observation (Future sight) and Armament haki(so potent that it goes through conquerors like Garp). anyway i hope you have a good day and please don't drop this work.❤️

One Piece: The Strawhats Gunslinger

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