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Well to start its a system novel so its already on easy mode for the MC compared to the others in the verse which is alright, but then there's the fact that the story itself is too fast paced I really hope its something that's only present in the first world since you don't feel an attachment to anything one moment he's an adjuchas and shortly after he's already a vasto lord and then the next he's in the human world making deals with Urahara that gets accepted very quickly theres barely any dialogues and the few that are there dont really make much of an impact. Nothing is making an impact in this story it just feels like a fast paced wishfulfilment where things happen just for the benefit of the MC since theres no struggle at all, which is completely fine I'd just wish the author had warned people about it so that i wouldn't really waste my time on it.

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Well the deals are being accepted so fast because they're backed into a corner of either his deal or your probably going to die/have someone you love get killed.