Review Detail of shawnr in Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

I tried, I really tried reading this. I even caught up to the latest chapter. it's just that I feel like this is just too real, i mean this is a breath of fresh air to the op fanfics out there but, I read fanfic for the story and the way they gave me an escape from the reality of how shitty the real world is. this is just not for me. and for those whom are interested in reading this, if you are the type of reader that just enjoy a story for what it is, then this is for you, but for those like me, then this is not for you I can accept a weak mc, but a weak mc that's also dumb, i get that you don't want to have op characters man but at least make him slightly above average and perform better too much angst, too much realism that i get reminded of how shitty the world is. too slow of progress, i get the slow progress but slow progress to the point that it's boring and i feel like as a character he is going no where, with the only character development is more angst and trauma. the mc is too weak will I mean by the latest chapter he had been in the Shinobi world for some time, i feel like he should have grown in terms of mentality, but no he is still weak willed, he may have grown a little bit but, it's too slow.