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Ahren
AhrenAuthor1yrAhren

Please let me know what you think. I'd be glad for any constructive criticisms you have.

Path of Desire [Moved]

Ahren

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lustful_king
lustful_kingLv4lustful_king

Is there incest in this story ? Also why not let the mc have traps it would be cool if he slowly begins to like traps otherwise there is no point in making men be attracted toward him

Ahren
AhrenAuthorAhren

Yes, if that's not what you're into, that's fine.

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Krypton71
Krypton71Lv12Krypton71

Yuri?

Ahren
AhrenAuthorAhren

maybe, though, if I did, it would be only between a select few, considering the world is supposed to be flipped and men are the submissive one whole female the dominant ones, I would have to find a way to work that in, if that's not to your liking then I understand, but for now I'd say no.

Krypton71:Yuri?
Ahren
AhrenAuthorAhren

I mean men are supposed to take the role of women and women of men, sorry for the mistake

Ahren:maybe, though, if I did, it would be only between a select few, considering the world is supposed to be flipped and men are the submissive one whole female the dominant ones, I would have to find a way to work that in, if that's not to your liking then I understand, but for now I'd say no.
Krypton71
Krypton71Lv12Krypton71

Yeah I thought so… not exactly a fan of yuri, but I will wait and see the reviews later on. Good luck with the story.

Ahren:maybe, though, if I did, it would be only between a select few, considering the world is supposed to be flipped and men are the submissive one whole female the dominant ones, I would have to find a way to work that in, if that's not to your liking then I understand, but for now I'd say no.
Ahren
AhrenAuthorAhren

Thank you!

Krypton71:Yeah I thought so… not exactly a fan of yuri, but I will wait and see the reviews later on. Good luck with the story.
uWu_69
uWu_69Lv4uWu_69

yuri?