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Review Detail of SandMaster7 in Villain Is on Vacation

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Beginning of the story was great, but it starts falling off when he's on the island. While I liked the chapters of him exploring the island, it seemed a little drawn out to me at times. Also not a fan of sentient systems, especially if it has an attitude and literally shocks the mc if it doesnt like what hes saying or doing. Then there is his streaming thing, I know he came from a super rich and influential family, but he's cut them off. I don't really get why he's gotten so popular and influential only by streaming, especially in the academy, when he only streams at most 2 hours a week. But that's just me and I kept reading... until the second volume where the author keeps changing pov of characters constantly, sometimes repeating the same events several times but from the drawn out perspective of several different characters and how they each experienced the repeated scene. Too many repeats, and too many pov's for me.

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Villain Is on Vacation

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Thanks. I am going to change that thing. I am currently editing chapters. It will be done after a week. Moreover, I am also thinking of adding more details that I missed.