As of now nothing is bad, the author made a good work of establishing characters and the world around them, but thats just the start of the story. As of now nothing major happened and mistakes are not hard to avoid, what I mean is the story has a good foundation and interesting characters. As far the author doesn't mess up royally like making the OC absurdly strong and making servants irrelevant, destroying all the tension, I think this story has the possibility of being one of the best fate fanfic in this site.
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