Review Detail of _SinOfGluttony_ in Reborn As An Evolving Monster
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It was good at the beginning but it got worse the more I started reading.The Mc has mood swings like a 13-year-old girl who just got her heart broken.
Reborn As An Evolving Monster
Adam_K47xx
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In the beginning, he seemed like a calculating and smart Guy, but he started to become dumber the more chapters I read.If I'm not remembering wrong he was sad that his wolf had no emotions and then went berserk when he got one.
_SinOfGluttony_:You made the mcs emotions too excessive and strong in 1 chapter, The moment some skeleton called him a demon candidate it went right in his head and now acts like he is the god emperor of the world. At one point he is calm as a stone and one second later he starts having a hissy fit. In my opinion you should have started to make him more arrogant slowly and not in 1 chapter.
You made the mcs emotions too excessive and strong in 1 chapter, The moment some skeleton called him a demon candidate it went right in his head and now acts like he is the god emperor of the world. At one point he is calm as a stone and one second later he starts having a hissy fit. In my opinion you should have started to make him more arrogant slowly and not in 1 chapter.
Adam_K47xx:Can I ask what you mean by the beginning? I am starting a new novel in January, and I think that one might be more to your liking. Would you mind expanding on your thoughts? That would be very helpful.Thanks for the review!