Review Detail of Mageloverilynoah in Reborn As An Evolving Monster

I remember leaving a review saying i hate Elisa bc she drags out the story and ruins the mc, Im back to say that Elisa is amazing but still for some reason whenever she was introduced and they finally got out of the dungeon everything feels so pointless? Mark will spend dozens of chapters thinking abt somethimg and get really close to and answer amd them BOOM elisa comes right when he almost has am amswer and he completely forgets everything. Love the story and love Elisa but author please dont drag out something for so many chapters with dumb interuptions, its so cliche. The mc will continue to almost be at the brink of something and it gets me on the edge of my seat (Its been ten chapters of just him brainstorming) them for whatever reason the mc will be like "thinking is too much for me right now" making the previous ten chapters pointless. All i want is progression. There is no need for an arc to consist of a drawn out fight where the same thing is continually repeated and a pointless brainstorm over and over again. it takes a solid 50 chapters for any progress to be seen. but i do.... love the tiny interactions between the three krista mark elisa, its just nice... but 20 chapters straight of these interactions can be a bit.... draining. Anyway love the story it truly is just enchanting. The story development is the ONLY bad thing abt this beautiful journey!!!!