great story so far! mc def frustrated me a bit in the begining because of his 'idiocy', which got a very good reason layer down the line.spoiler alert:really like the esteregg with gaavah being pride in hebrew (:
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LIKEAfer few more chapters it will get much better until he meet Elisa, then its a bit worse but still worth reading if u can stand here presence
DrGrace:Wait a second! There were reasons for the mc being an idiot!? Bakana!I left the novel at chap 15 because it grew real frustrating.