Ok,this one is bad ! Full of grammar errors, a copy paste plot, small chapter like summary and cause this is copy paste from another story the whole plot make no sense overall... full of plot holes !
Ydo_Dominnus
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LIKEJust a heads up, in this fic I'm basically merging the tyranny of steel in Game of Thrones with just a few changes. I'm not a writer, my goal is to encourage other people to write a better fic than this, either because they thought the idea was cool or just because they hated my writing. I just make a request to let me know when they write so I can read it too. Thanks for reading.