Review Detail of Majer3 in Deathly Alpha

This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ Okay I picked the one without children in synopsis I feel its the right choice now what Im still waking up. Ugh children.. -Deathly Alpha super gene immortality guy -He had forbidden love for himself/5 eeee what does it mean xDDD going ee solo?? -A woman who wants to kill immortal man. Is it impossible considering what was written just several rows before. Welll maybe she doesn't just know the details and she is just enjoying seeing people die. I don't judge. -World building explodes from the dark room. -No joke, this is really nice build up and information flow. -Dialogue is exceedingly well placed + feelings coming from it. -Okay now the quality of the story is basically up to the balance of the world and what medium and long arcs there will be. Also motives play part in this and side characters have to have some possibility than just being named plank tokens instead of a person. If all of this checks and this thing runs for several hundred chapters there might be veeeery good results.