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Review Detail of RandomSwordsThief in I'm The Villain? I will Live As I Want

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I honestly liked the idea of the novel, but 90 percent of the story is info dumps and him speaking to his system. The first chapter where everything is supposed to be customized lost its meaning. He keeps getting race changes, new elements, and all the extra stuff. I wish he deserved those rewards. He didn't do anything at all. What happened, plot-wise, so far (50 chapters in) is only him beating the kids right after transmigration, some family drama regarding what happened during the beating, and a new individual becoming the family's patriarch after a voting session. This could have been done in 10-15 chapters at most. The author is good but is completely indecisive. It's like they keep changing their plans every chapter or 2. They choose something, hesitate, and then change. A rewrite is required. People only like this because the protagonist is ruthless.

I'm The Villain? I will Live As I Want

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