Review Detail of Illona_sama_5462 in Lustful Sun God

Hello Author, I really like the writing quality, your stability, the development, the world background but maybe, my problem can be on the character, but I give you all the rest of the marks because of your "I'm not a professional, but I have a story to tell." You also said it is your first story, so I would like to encourage you. è_é Please, I hope you always find your inspiration and creativity to strive. As an author myself, I want to learn a bit from other authors and I will like to read your books to learn. Good job and keep going!