Review Detail of NovaAias in In Twilight

The story is alright, it obviously does the job that it's written for and I can respect that, but a part of me feels like it's a way too cringey to read. In say...a fictional cartoon/anime, maybe you can get away with that crack behavior, but in a 'realistic world' setting, whatever it's worth, this guy should have gotten punched more than a few times on principle. Or killed. Or you know, be part of a deranged family of psychopaths. In short, I'll admit that the story is good for what it is, but it's not something I'm willing to add to my collection or continue reading. Keep it up though.