This webnovel is actually pretty good. I only want to suggest that if possible, you should also update on weekends as well since from what I've heard, doing that, is actually quite recommendable. I got kind of lost in some parts, and sometimes I don't know if a character is talking or not. If a character talks, try to use "" ok? But this has potential, and, hey, 4.8/5 stars? That pretty much means you are very beloved, so keep up the good work for the audience!
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