Review Detail of eQzy in One piece : Celestial Rose

I read it and at one moment I understood something. The protagonist does not behave like a real leader, but like a teenager spewing nonsense. Everything is easy for him, he is the smartest, most beautiful, cool, arrogant. Did you find an immon fruit? I'll just create the same, but without the cons. Plenty of holes in the plot, illogical actions. What else to talk about when he tells everyone the knowledge that, in principle, he could not know. The dumbest thing is that he recruits people into his "family" or team. There is no disclosure of characters, only some stupid words at the wrong time and place. He behaves like an ordinary person, puts himself in a position equal to any other person, but at the same time considers himself superior to everyone and all that. In general, this wild dissonance infuriated the entire fanfic.