Review Detail of Leylin_Farlier99 in Pokemon: Unbeatable

welp, gotta be honest here, this fic has potential to be good, very good. the Grammer is good, there are no spelling mistakes and tye update consistently is also good. Mc got some good cheats from GOD, and he got a starter that most people don't even think of(tho the starter is very good), and he got character development in latest chapter, which is rare as most mc's take much more time to get a wake up call and character development. the world background is good for now, the power system is explained in a simple manner and so is the potential system. Give it a try, you wouldn't be disappointed, as for you Author, keep up with the excellent work man, there aren't many good pokemon fics, and yours is a gem waiting to be polished.