Review Detail of Lazysam in The Damned Demon

I just found out about your novel and I have to say it was really good, especially the tower of hell arc. Good enough that I spent the whole night reading chapter after chapter. The characters felt real. The depth of the emotions they exhibited seemed natural. The descriptions were pretty good as they helped me visualise easily. But the world-building seemed a bit lagging, maybe because I am currently at somewhere around 110 or 111. But it doesn't matter to me much as I can feel the world will only get bigger and bigger, especially with lots of questions about asher's origin remaining unanswered. Can you tell me, if it's not too much to ask you, how did you improve your writing this much? like any book you read or any youtube videos you watched apart from practising regularly. As a beginner author, I'd really like some advice from you. But no matter what, please keep the story going. I'll be cheering you on 😁.