Review Detail of ImUnknown987 in The Damned Demon

Worse than his other novels unfortunately. It seems rushed and not planned at all, since a lot of it is quite illogical and full of plot holes. Barely any world background. Stupid characters. Like how can a queen be so stupid, when she was most likely taught from birth. Aswell as overly gullible for falling for obvious lies. Character design is quite bare. Plot is slow and filled with 50% fillers. Writing quality is ok, could be better. Grammar and translation is meh, a lot of sentences are kinda back to front, kinda how yoda speaks.