Review Detail of Garland in Limits of the Flesh in DXD

To be honest, compared to your other stories, i really felt that this version of Jake doesn't really make it fun to read. His interaction with the other jake and the situation he was told made him feel like a simp. It would have been fine if certaim actions he did take the interest of girls but he pretty much easily caught the interestn of Rias by appealing to ehat she enjoyed. That is why i really liked Jake from My Upgrades are Invincible. He did actions to become strong which had the effects of women loving him. He created weapons that he could use to get strong which caught the attention and Hephaestus. He didn't do it to gain her affection. Heck, the msre fact that what he immediately did was hide from Freya shows that women wasn't his main priority. As much as i like your stories, a main character like this just doesn't reaply make it enjoyable to read.