Review Detail of RomanceFanatic028 in Unfortunately, She Is Mine

Okay, so the storyline was very interesting. It's been a long time since i read about billionaire genre so it was refreshing. Everything was great, except the writing style. I don't know why but something felt off. I am sorry if it offended you but some dialogues seemed very weird to hear it. Overall, the grammatical errors can be fixed easily. It happened to me too, so it's not a big deal. I wish you all the best. And hope you keep doing better.