Review Detail of GodOfLightning in Femdom Island
Review detail
Sorry it seems to be a good story but as soon as he loses parts of his memory I dropped I hate when stories do this it ruins it because we are supposed to be able to imagine ourselves and know one wants to lose a convenient memory that can help them. If you didn’t want the Mc to know where he was going or who his family is you don’t have to give him one I’m guessing he will just remember parts of it at some point that is crucial or the worst of times. How does his sister inherit the family business if she is adopted is something I also want to know there is a bit of forced plot.
Femdom Island
ElectricLuna
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Why leave the business to the adopted child and not the one you bore who gives the child they had nothing but the adopted one everything
ElectricLuna:Thanks for the review 💖 I understand that people can find some tropes unpleasant but last part about sister it's not a plot hole. she inherited and developed business for a reason.
Well, I will have to spoil if I explain this but I will just say that sister is not a simple human and story can get more complex💖
GodOfLightning:Why leave the business to the adopted child and not the one you bore who gives the child they had nothing but the adopted one everything
Not everyone cares about blood, a solid businessman/businesswoman cares about capability and trust. Get that through your thick head.
GodOfLightning:Why leave the business to the adopted child and not the one you bore who gives the child they had nothing but the adopted one everything
This is completely false statistics show people would give their buisness to their children before anyone else including adopted children.
Immortal_Locus:Not everyone cares about blood, a solid businessman/businesswoman cares about capability and trust. Get that through your thick head.
I wouldn't, if I had a choice between a extremely capable child I adopted or my blood child who while capable is only about average? I would choose the capable child over the blood child, cause at the end of the day they carry my last name and thus are part of my family, simple as that.
GodOfLightning:This is completely false statistics show people would give their buisness to their children before anyone else including adopted children.
A lot of people say that but it’s not what they end up doing there is always more love for the child born of your blood because of certain chemicals and how humans work so you can say that but it’s not what you would end up doing unless you just really hate your son or daughter.
Immortal_Locus:I wouldn't, if I had a choice between a extremely capable child I adopted or my blood child who while capable is only about average? I would choose the capable child over the blood child, cause at the end of the day they carry my last name and thus are part of my family, simple as that.
GodOfLightning:A lot of people say that but it’s not what they end up doing there is always more love for the child born of your blood because of certain chemicals and how humans work so you can say that but it’s not what you would end up doing unless you just really hate your son or daughter.
Estoy completamente de acuerdo contigo, es molesto, lo he visto pasar en muchas historias y las dejo caer muy rapido
Anderson_Thenshi:A mí lo que no me gusta de la historia es que siempre piensa en su hermana, mi hermana esto mi hermana aquello, detesto cuando en la historia el protagonista se enfoca en un personaje que no conozco y nisiquiera se si es real.