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Five stars for motivation. I try to give my most honest opinion: -I didn't understand much of the start -If the chapters are divided by the author like in the first chapter it looks really bad. -It's really confusing and it sounds like the author is trying to set up a kind of mysterious mood, but it really isn't going well. I can't really explain how to do it better but someone who can do it really well is NoWoRRyMaN, I recommend looking into any of his books for reference. -If you aren't using Grammarly already, I recommend you use it. You don't have to pay, just the free version is already good enough I hope something here is useful and incentives you, the author, to write more. The more you write the better it gets.
Code Break HSK
Takabe
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man I don't know how to write a novel in a decent format. My English skills are just not that great, I'm an artist not a author so what I have here is a good story but it's not well described. I want to release a comic in the next month or so, like a few chapters and stuff so people understand it via pictures than just writing itself.
If that's the case I think you should try out some other site like webtoon that's more popular about these things. But it's still really hard to draw everyday, I can't do it, goodluck.
Takabe:man I don't know how to write a novel in a decent format. My English skills are just not that great, I'm an artist not a author so what I have here is a good story but it's not well described. I want to release a comic in the next month or so, like a few chapters and stuff so people understand it via pictures than just writing itself.