Review Detail of Andrea_Desa in The adventure in MOONO

I'm an amateur who just started writing. Things are coming from my dream and imagination. I know i might not be a great as any other author but i'm trying to be better than my current and old self in the field of writtings. There might some error, some part where you feel similiar to other story,but i promise you this i write with only a fingers typing with eyes focus on the monitor and mind wander the plot of story. Thankyou for visiting everyone . Bless you