I found this short story to be very interesting. The plotline was engaging and the writing was generally strong, with some minor errors scattered throughout. However, these mistakes did not detract from the overall quality of the piece. The author's descriptive skills really shone through and contributed to the immersive experience of the story. Good work author, keep it up!
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