Review Detail of Lvec in Humanity's Last Hero
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Ohhh just finished reading this just before you transferred this, well anyways I think this is a good novel its kinda like dxd but more darker and realistic I guess thats my take after reading before the rewrite, but at the same time its was kinda confusing at first tbh and their was some unnecessary dialogs or jokes, I dont really mind but if its used to much it kinda gets annoying. Over all I like its its good and please keep updating this.
Humanity's Last Hero
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Yeah man, I think I paced the story too fast and the interactions were way too less and the plot was moving fast also the world building was getting confusing even Deaths which I wanted to have a bigger impact was getting messed up so I decided to make chapters bigger and make the MC interact more with the side characters. Also the jokes will be really less on this one since I am planning on making it a serious one and the ones I made would have got annoying by chapter 15 or so. Hence I shifted the novel into originals and well am trying to make it better. Hope you like it đ